After we had finished editing our first cut of our film opening we viewed them all and gave each other a peer assessment. The shot where we show the image of Poppy before she became a prostitute was too jerky and unsteady, so we have decided to re-shoot that with two separate shots and not just one like we had done previously. The scenes of Pole's Lane were too long so we have decided that when we come to re-edit the next cut of the film opening we need to cut down on the amount of the scene we use. We also have to get the sound track (A-Team) recorded for copyright purposes and work this in with Shaunagh's voice over as we didn't know how to change the volume so it worked by having Shaunagh talking over the top of the A-Team track. Also one of the shots we took at Nicola's house, has a loud sound on the video of a gust of wind which we will need to turn down in our next edit.
Overall as a group we need to:
Re-shoot the scene of Poppy's old school photograph
Add in another shot to make it clear that she is dead (maybe instead of strangling her, she is stabbed to death)
Also we were thinking of putting in another shot of Harry in his normal life, because we almost seem to forget about the murderer, and to make him look more menacing.
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